Hi Ivan – I am a native English speaker with a background in business consulting, marketing and IT management. My speciality is writing high quality copy for website content, articles, brochures, technical manuals, eBooks, press releases, case studies and business documents.
I write many pages of content with the objective of focusing on the benefits to the user. Product and service features must be converted into benefits. Your copy must describe how your products or services will solve a problem for the user.
I like the laid back B&W style of your site. The words you have are not bad but, yes, they can be imbued with more emotional appeal.
Also, I would suggest splitting the text into 2 or 3 instances (in between the image blocks), rather than a single chunk, which is visually a turn-off. And a larger font size is vital to avoid eye strain!
I am available to begin immediately and I will deliver the first draft within 24 hours. You may request as many revisions as you want.
Thanks and best wishes,
Dan