Hi there!
First things first, I was absolutely delighted by your usage of the word "naff". I haven't heard that word in years!
As to the project - I went through your booklet, and I see some places where improvement can be made. Do you want the number of words to remain the same? In making it sound personal, I might have to make the content a slight bit lengthier. Hope that won't be a problem.
I'll need to confer with you to understand about your business, and then I'll provide my first draft. After input and comments by you, I'll make any required changes, and submit the final draft.
By the way, the booklet looks absolutely lovely. The designing was top-notch. I'd love to work on it and make it better, content-wise.
Drop me a message whenever you have the time, and we can discuss this project further. I look forward to hearing from you!
Thanks,
Priya