Developmental Editor

We have 100+ pages of transcriptions of technical presentations that have been created in Microsoft Word. We need a developmental editor to complete an edit pass of the content to remove jargon, change passive voice to active voice, and to improve the content overall so that it reads more technical for our training workbooks. We need a developmental editor with a mastery of English language who can: • Improve readability through clearer communication and formatting • Ensure that the writing fits its intended goal and audience • Improve clarity and effectiveness by identifying inconsistencies, redundancies, omissions, awkward transitions, outdated or incorrect information, and errors in logic • Eliminate excess material • Check for wording that impairs credibility by being too tentative or by overpromising See the attached sample document and please submit a short 1-2 page sample of your edits to the attached document. All bids should be based on # of edited pages.