Ideal Client's Story - Kevin J. Williams

I am a lawyer with 2 main areas of practice - serious personal injury and general outside counsel/business litigation. I need an editor to help me finish a short "scene" in the life of the "Ideal Client" who checks both boxes. It's approximately 700 words. It's the story I will tell on my website. It's the story I will be telling over and over again in various settings to connect with potential clients who have similar obstacles, concerns, fears, etc. The background is as follows: Background – JP helps run a small family owned construction company with his dad and older brother. The business is struggling as of late. JP’s dad has lost a step or two and JP knows he needs to have some difficult conversations with his dad and brother. First about the recent problems, but more importantly about a succession plan for the future. Then, tragedy strikes. I uploaded the scene. Best, Kevin