Hello,
my name is Elina and I would like to redact the text for you. You are actualy right to think it is not correct - it is not even close in some cases. I mean, I am certain the whitening effect does not last for only 2 minutes, like the site advertises at this moment. I could go on with further examples, but I think there is no point in doing so.
Anyway, being a native Greek speaker and experienced translator I am certain I can make your website shine. Please, let me tell you that I have worked on a similar subject in the past, so I am familiar with the words and expressions used in teeth whitening product descriptions (my past work was about Stella White Strips, for Scandinavian Ecommerce, but I am not allowd to provide a sample, due to the non disclosure agreement I have signed).
Please feel free to contact me for any further information, as well as my cv, work samples, and references.
Thank you for your time.
Kind regards,
Elina